Mercy's Accomplice

This was super tense. I loved it!

When the sheriff came the first time - that was my favorite part, from thinking about what she will do, to the reveal (wondering is the cop the good guy or the bad guy, too) about the murders, to thinking will she tell.

Great story. I hope you write more.

Thank you! I enjoyed the process so much that I plan on writing more. Maybe some of those many story ideas will yield some prompts for me.

I just got to read this piece now. It is really well written. A lot of lovely details through out the piece. I really enjoyed the dog here! And please, do more!

Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this, and plan on writing more. Your encouragement means a lot to me.

Omg the tension! Really loved this one. Abel needs a medal.

Thanks! Abel's wonderful.

I’m loving your short fic era everything is a gem

Thank you! That motivates me to keep trying!

Very well written.

Thanks!

I liked this, it was well structured especially considering how short it is. Congrats!

Thank you! I am learning and hoping that focusing on short fiction will teach me more about effective fiction writing in general.

I honestly think that's a good idea and will consider trying it out myself.

A well written story !

Thank you!

Absolutely loved it! Especially that key scene. You wrote that so well; it sent shivers down my spine. Won't say more...don't want to spoil it for other readers.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Enjoyed it tremendously. I love reading mysteries :)

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