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Aiden Marquis | Fantasy Writer's avatar

This was super tense. I loved it!

When the sheriff came the first time - that was my favorite part, from thinking about what she will do, to the reveal (wondering is the cop the good guy or the bad guy, too) about the murders, to thinking will she tell.

Great story. I hope you write more.

Kostia Dmytriiev's avatar

I just got to read this piece now. It is really well written. A lot of lovely details through out the piece. I really enjoyed the dog here! And please, do more!

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